Nu prea observ greseli grave de gramatica.
Pe de alta parte:
1. Our restaurant provides the best ...
Nu e nevoie sa folosesti "the customer"
2. because we came UP with an interesting idea
3. there are already A few restaurants
4.
"there are already a few restaurants WHICH / THAT came up with this idea.
5. Se repeta "idea" de prea multe ori
6. "customers how to use the tablet if they don”t know how to use it." - know how se repeta de prea multe ori, schimba
7. surfing (on) the internet. Corect este "surf the internet"
8. in our town THERE are...
In legatura cu continutul:
Sincer, nu inteleg de ce ai spune ca deja exista alte restaurante de acest tip. Obiectivul tau este sa promovezi. De ce ti-ai taia craca de sub picioare precizand ca ai copiat ideea?
Sper ca nu am ratat nimic. Bafta! :)